tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9027621747663402662.post7213687561997844548..comments2023-10-30T05:22:23.322-04:00Comments on to taste a peach: Echo editTaffinyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00961088325369065690noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9027621747663402662.post-14575417131999479912008-11-17T09:17:00.000-05:002008-11-17T09:17:00.000-05:00Vanilla,but, trouble is I am not sure when I am im...Vanilla,<BR/><BR/>but,<BR/> trouble is I am not sure when I am improving, making it worse, <BR/>or just tinkering aboutTaffinyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00961088325369065690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9027621747663402662.post-21081776730645093982008-11-16T01:00:00.000-05:002008-11-16T01:00:00.000-05:00This is the start of the process, Taff - I also st...This is the start of the process, Taff - I also start by noticing wordiness, sentence structure etc. I think, personally, that plot - and often characterisation - are the most difficult aspects to see clearly for oneself. When you've done your first edit, fixing the things you can see now, then it will be time to share your MS with other writers to get their feedback.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.com