tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9027621747663402662.post1510317620484224228..comments2023-10-30T05:22:23.322-04:00Comments on to taste a peach: editing comaTaffinyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00961088325369065690noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9027621747663402662.post-52873405585260549402008-12-02T17:05:00.000-05:002008-12-02T17:05:00.000-05:00Paul and Vesper,whew, yes. Thanks. My mom and co...Paul and Vesper,<BR/><BR/>whew, yes. Thanks. My mom and cousin each have a copy now; and I am happy to be taking a break from it. I am finding though that I spend time worrying what they will think of it. I'm not worried about the writing feedback, I know they will find weak areas and point them out to me; that's what I want. BUT...I am concerned about how they will feel about the story overall; if they will "get it".Taffinyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00961088325369065690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9027621747663402662.post-91726862123728906212008-12-02T14:24:00.000-05:002008-12-02T14:24:00.000-05:00Yes, this is what you have to do.Yes, this is what you have to do.Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9027621747663402662.post-13547375914415643352008-11-30T21:07:00.000-05:002008-11-30T21:07:00.000-05:00That sounds like a good plan. You are at the point...That sounds like a good plan. You are at the point where you need somebody else to read it. Plus you need an emotional break from it. It can only help to take a rest.<BR/><BR/>Paulstrugglingwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04895062852286494753noreply@blogger.com